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PostSubject: Meta   Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:13 pm

Name:Meta

Nickname/ Codename: Gears,Rachet,Metal

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Age:16

Affinity: resistance fighter

Face claim: Avi

Powers/Abilities/Weapons etc:
30-30 shotgun
12 gauge shotgun
double barrel shotgun sawed off.
hunting knife
scope
i have the abitlity to weild fire and use it aganist my foes.my weakness would be water.


(History/Description: (3 paragraphs. Details are good!)
My father and mother left me when i was 9 to fend for my self.I had to get money on my own.so i went out to sell newspapers and live on bread and tea.Then when i was 13 the whole genisis program started.People ran around my town crazy after we where invaded.NOw its just a ghost town.

Uniform/Appearance: Avi. I have a green jacket along with a black under shirt caoted with a bullet proof vest. I wear black jeans fited along with metal gears that run down to my boots. I go around wooting wahtever i can find.

Personality: Im a real nice guy.Im not use to speaking since iv been on my own for 7 years.i can get mad though. I have a short temper

Codeword: (if you dont know what this is you shouldn't be applying yet.)


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PostSubject: Re: Meta   Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:01 am

Meta please fill every aspect of the ~Application Template~ and please look ~here~ for a guide as to how much you should be writing for your app. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Meta   Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: Meta   Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:44 am

Meta you still haven't filled in every aspect of the ~Application Template~ nor have you sufficiently filled out your app. I still require much more detail from you. Also you have yet to fix your grammar. I will not approve you until your app is up to the same standards as the other approved applications found ~here~

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PostSubject: Re: Meta   Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:18 am

ok what is wrong with my grammer its fine!
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PostSubject: Re: Meta   Sun Nov 29, 2009 5:17 am

Yes your grammar has been fixed, however spaces after full stops and comma's are muchly appreciated. You still haven't filled out your charries history enough, nor have you entered the codeword. Overall your app is still much too short and i will not approve it until i feel it is ready.

Also your powers are identical to mine. I would appreciate it if you could try to use a little bit of imagination and come up with a unique power for yourself.

So again i give you the links to ~the Rules~ and ~an application example~.

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